Analysis of DPS

my DPS originally started with three pictures of a band playing, unfortunately the quality was extremely low and i was advised to scrap them, i then planned out the layout, once i had taken some new photos i had already planned where to put them, my feedback was the pictures looked to bundled up and crushing the text and many people said it was odd how the guitar was cut off. so i removed one of the pictures and re arranged the text, i then changed the picture to one where the neck of the guitar was over lapping onto the next page the feedback was then very positive saying it looked very cool and similar to a rock DPS but the pictures looked very similar, unfortunatly the only other photos i had where from the same photoshoot and i attempted to use a different one but it looked completely out of place with the other larger image.